Response to Eddywrites – Love and it Technicolor



Love is the BITTER SWEET that makes you heady,

leaving you giggling with glittering eyes

washed white

with happy painful tears.

Love keeps you laughing

until your ribs starts cracking.

It leaves you crying

so hard you think you are dying.


But love is no liar.

I tell you and that’s no lie

It’s a wide burning fire.

It is a double edged sword

that keeps you short

of intelligent snorts


Love is true when it’s true,

it drives you nut when it is not.


Love can choose not to live

in two hearts, in the same life

at the same level with a leverage

at the same intensity.


Love lives in one and

to leave the other empty


Love does bath you in happiness

she gives meaning to your existence.

She offers you joy,

takes your mind on a journey

to a different world

where you see shades of green

in a grinning purple discus:

a world where crickets dance

and frogs sing


There is no escaping from love my darling,

we are loving creatures

miserable when we don’t love,

dammed when we do love.


By all means, clean, oh clean

cling to your cleaning broom.

Leave no welcome mat in your comb,

leave stinging bees at your door.


But I tell you, oh I tell you

I shout it up to the mountains,

let them mouth it in echoes,

let them bear me witness

that when love bear hugs you,

it won’t care whether your loving being

has been a subject of burnt offering.

It’ll find the lost you

in the fountain of lost souls.


Oh, you won’t see it coming,

she’ll sneak up on you

like a seasoned thief in the night.

She would take you by storm

and storm you breathless.


I hope for the love of God,

for the sake of your delicate heart

that you dedicate your strength

to making love

lure the object of your love

with much more passion.

So your heart can lives on

to tell tales of the compassion

of love.



4 thoughts on “Love

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